Thank you for careful read. That is cool and I take that is Dutch? I had only come across the German variant which was the genesis for this poem, so it is cool if that is Dutch, as I am learning the language now. I have a trip in May to visit the Netherlands for the first time and am really excited. Belgium and Germany next-in-line.
Very hard to pick a favorite line to share here. One of my favorites of yours, Trevor!
Yeah, this one is a treasure, took a long while to get it all exactly as to how i want it. Thanks for the read and restack!
Well done! You capture these paradoxes so creatively:
"There is the sole prevailing
And overarching conundrum
Which never ceases in no-time".
Thank you for the thorough read and comment!! I certainly love to bring up the paradoxes and contradictions in this universe.
I like the paradox at the end, 'A presence is about absense'. In the north of Belgium, we also use this expression: moederziel alleen.
Thank you for careful read. That is cool and I take that is Dutch? I had only come across the German variant which was the genesis for this poem, so it is cool if that is Dutch, as I am learning the language now. I have a trip in May to visit the Netherlands for the first time and am really excited. Belgium and Germany next-in-line.
Yes, it’s Dutch, or Flemish as we call our version of Dutch, but it’s basically the same. You won’t understand our dialects though :)
Well that is cool nonetheless, thank you for sharing!!