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Martin Lane's avatar

Going for that beyond words thing, I love this.

Trevor Kuether's avatar

That's the ultimate goal!! Thanks for the read and compliment!!

Mahdi Meshkatee's avatar

To me, Trevor, it reads like a fresh spin on having and being.

Trevor Kuether's avatar

Thank you for the thorough read. This was written before my own readings of Being and Time and the Phenomenology of Spirit, so it is fun that an intellectual attempt isn’t needed for poetry. Just let it come out.

Mahdi Meshkatee's avatar

And curiously enough, I could glean a lot of Heidegger from this.